Is this a good plot for a middle school story? (I'm not skilled or anything..)?

A girl named Lily Beals and her friends Maggie Watson and Cepheus Dorgan are in cl while their mean teacher gives Lily and Maggie detention also a boy named Jared McCoy and his best friend Kai Mathews. So Jared says something to offend the school's snotty girl with the rich daddy named Sadie Lavenge which makes her run away somewhere in school, and Lily and friends hate her to death but they find her in the basement of the school along with Jared and Kai, and they all swear they've seen a ghost/been hearing weird things so they start going down more and Cepheus checks books out of the library about ghosts and stuff and the ghost is really a mother of a child, and the child's father blinded the mother and they call her the ghost of white eyes so it's their job to find and defeat the father but the problem is no one will believe them, any other ideas? is this lame?